A SWEET, CLEAN READING EXPERIENCE BROUGHT TO YOU BY AUTHOR MORGAN MANDEL
Saturday, September 20, 2008
Overpacking by Morgan Mandel
We've got one more trip left to visit our cottage in Wisconsin next weekend. Before we owned one, I thought if we had our own place I wouldn't need to pack as much.
Wrong. I pack even more. Not only that, I overpack. Then I get to the cottage and have to unpack. Since it's not a large place, finding room for everything presents a challenge.
The same thing can happen with manuscripts. It's easy to make an exception here and there. Pretty soon the manuscript is loaded down with adjectives, adverbs and those little no-no words, like just, that, so.
There's little room for them. Remember to get the majority of them them out before you send your manuscript off on a trip to an editor.
Morgan Mandel
www.morganmandel.com
http://bloodredpencil.blogspot.com
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I love other writers. Everything somehow relates to writing! Packing. Cooking. Cats. Whatever. It relates to writing.
ReplyDeleteHave fun Morgan.